Adam, Blake, Elena, Dani, Mikki, Sean, and Travis are group of students in Animation at Seneca this is our blog of our art work, and on occasion things that are worth noting as reference or whatever.
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Sunday, July 18, 2010
INCOMPLETE
Hey, so this is my latest working-on project. It's not done. But I don't feel like continuing either. Maybe I'll work on it some other time. So I'ma just post it anywayyyssss.
Pros: I really like that angle of the face. I think you did a marvolus job on that one! I also like the blank eye. I'm not sure if you are planning on putting in a pupil or not but the blank eye seems like a really good choice. Sean your hands actually look like they're holding a gun! That is AWESOME! And I do friggin love how you draw guns. I thnk that is a really big strong point in your art, your structure.
Cons: First off, I think the biggest thing hurting you here is the neck. Something is wrong in the area. I'm going to take a stab and say that it is the jaw line or perhaps if you removed that line at the top of the neck and bottem of chin. It makes me think of a Barbie doll who's head has been squished backwards. I also dislike the abs, they bother me. I think you could even take them out and just put the line in for the lower ribs. It might even make this thing look more like a demon depending where you wanted this drawing to go. I also think you could point hair to show that he is jumping off the building or something. The way it falls right now makes it looks like he's being sucked up by a vortex or that he's hanging in mid air. Lastly I think that you could place that building behind him better to make a better composition.
yea, I had to guess when it came to the neck and jawline, I spent most of my time on that. And the abs, aren't going to be that defined, I just drew them in there when i was building the character and the pose... and the pose was cut in half ((I took out the legs, I didn't like them))
I don't really know where I was going with it, I just wanted the angle, maybe him just falling from up somewhere, but jumping off the building is a cool idea xD though, composition wise... I don't know how to control that really, I suck at it >.<
Pros: I really like that angle of the face. I think you did a marvolus job on that one! I also like the blank eye. I'm not sure if you are planning on putting in a pupil or not but the blank eye seems like a really good choice.
ReplyDeleteSean your hands actually look like they're holding a gun! That is AWESOME! And I do friggin love how you draw guns. I thnk that is a really big strong point in your art, your structure.
Cons: First off, I think the biggest thing hurting you here is the neck. Something is wrong in the area. I'm going to take a stab and say that it is the jaw line or perhaps if you removed that line at the top of the neck and bottem of chin. It makes me think of a Barbie doll who's head has been squished backwards. I also dislike the abs, they bother me. I think you could even take them out and just put the line in for the lower ribs. It might even make this thing look more like a demon depending where you wanted this drawing to go. I also think you could point hair to show that he is jumping off the building or something. The way it falls right now makes it looks like he's being sucked up by a vortex or that he's hanging in mid air. Lastly I think that you could place that building behind him better to make a better composition.
That my two cents.
Keep going Sean! YAY!
thanks!
ReplyDeleteyea, I had to guess when it came to the neck and jawline, I spent most of my time on that. And the abs, aren't going to be that defined, I just drew them in there when i was building the character and the pose... and the pose was cut in half ((I took out the legs, I didn't like them))
I don't really know where I was going with it, I just wanted the angle, maybe him just falling from up somewhere, but jumping off the building is a cool idea xD though, composition wise... I don't know how to control that really, I suck at it >.<